Stop The Violence MAG

By Anonymous

   Drugs all over under the ground.
Guns, people crying, putting each otherdown.
People every day do crazy things.
Buying fancy cars and a lot ofrings.
You have nothing to show for yourself.
You're dying on the inside,and you have bad health.
I wonder what the community can do.
I have noidea, not even a clue.
I look in the paper and I see someone dead.
They layon the stretcher like it was a bed.
The mothers stand in silence.
Peopleshould think TO STOP THE VIOLENCE!!!



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on May. 9 2010 at 9:37 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

true that!! awesome poem. it had real meaning

Eilatan GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 9:56 am
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

I love this! it sounds like you're rapping. amazing.

on Apr. 9 2010 at 6:05 pm
this was a very good poem it was nice and cool!!!

on Apr. 7 2010 at 10:08 pm
I love this poem!!!!!

kaelyn_brown said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 6:02 pm
I THINK THAT THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM 

O.G-B.C said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 2:56 am
THIS IS A GOOD POEM...I LIKE IT NOTBAD.....

MY COMMENT said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 4:09 pm
OMG THIS IS THE BEST VIOLENCE POEM I EVER HEARD

truedat said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:49 pm
Not very deep. I have seen puddles deeper than this poem.

Jessica said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 8:31 pm
What do we get from violence? death crime, innocent victims. what is wrong with this world. violence is at every corner theres nothing we can do to stop it just hope that it will be some change sooner or later..

on Dec. 6 2009 at 7:01 am
haana114 PLATINUM, -, Other
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i really love this poem.i also like the way it rhymes

Sunshineyday said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 7:45 am
I love when i see other kids besides me write about important things. This needed to be said, thanks for saying it so artfully.

tasi234 said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 3:31 am
i like it.....

Rabaya GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2009 at 7:21 pm
Rabaya GOLD, Jamaica, New York
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wow. this is a really nice poem!

on Jun. 10 2009 at 11:33 pm
Passion03 BRONZE, Brea, California
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I woke up this morning lying in bed, I was asking myself;
What are some of the secrets of success in life?
I found the answer right there, in my very room.
The Fan said... Be cool
The Roof said... Aim High
The Window said... See the world
The Clock said... Every minute is precious
The Mirror said... Reflect before you act
The Calendar said... Be up-to-date
The Door said... Push hard for your goals
--Unknown

great poem and very true nice work keep it up

on Jun. 10 2009 at 8:43 pm
Rebecca Hoshaw BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I like it; deep, meaningful, true.

Good Job.

jessaxxx10x said...
on Nov. 25 2008 at 5:24 pm
this is a amazing poem keep up the great work:)

Smokey said...
on Nov. 22 2008 at 11:45 pm
I really like this poem.

shannon said...
on Nov. 18 2008 at 6:47 pm
omg you are a good poet


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