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   Drugs all over under the ground.
Guns, people crying, putting each otherdown.
People every day do crazy things.
Buying fancy cars and a lot ofrings.
You have nothing to show for yourself.
You're dying on the inside,and you have bad health.
I wonder what the community can do.
I have noidea, not even a clue.
I look in the paper and I see someone dead.
They layon the stretcher like it was a bed.
The mothers stand in silence.
Peopleshould think TO STOP THE VIOLENCE!!!


This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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NattyPie said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 4:52 pm:

Did anyone ever think that maybe the grammar is part of the style of the poem?

 

 
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NattyPie said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 4:49 pm:
I like your style. The words stuck together reminded me of e.e. cummings a little bit. It's brilliant and I love the subject. I totally agree your perspective. Very insightful.
 
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iLuvLife said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 3:58 pm:
This is really nice; keep up the good work. Hope people read & learn from this. <3
 
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spency said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 11:35 am:
this is really nice
 
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MLGBattleDiva said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 11:09 am:
Very good, keep it up
 
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jesus#7 said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 11:09 am:
wats up kyler
 
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MLGbattlediva said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 11:10 am:

Thats not my real name, its cats.

 

 
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MLGcougars said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 11:12 am:
wats up MLGBATTLEDIVA
 
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MLGBattlediva said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 11:14 am:

The sky. Duhhh. I love burrtioes.

 

PS. Tacos are good too

 
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RanaHewezi1998This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 9:49 am:
awwww :( that truly makes me wnt to do a difference
 
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birdcage2 said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 9:24 am:
This is a really good poem i wrote one just kind of like it. yeah what ever hapend tot he world? they call this the land of the free?
 
NattyPie replied...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 4:50 pm :
I totally agree.
 
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K.M.S.Shear said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 8:09 am:
i agree nice wording
 
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reblep said...
May 18, 2011 at 7:31 pm:
this is so true. sad. but true. i really liked it
 
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sobeautiful101 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 1:54 pm:
this is a great poem and i really believe u have potential to be a posotive writer and thanks for your input.
 
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dnm ! said...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 12:10 pm:
soooo truee
 
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inspir3d This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 8:03 am:
great message, and that's a cause that I'm very interested in personally. but i'm a little frustrated that poems like this can rise to the top so quickly just because the topic is a hot button in society. Quality oughta be the hot button on this site.
 
samisback replied...
May 18, 2011 at 11:08 am :
i completely agree with you, poems like this seem to pop up and rise to the top.
 
ElleNicole replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 5:01 pm :
Agreed. No offense, this poem has no quality. It's a nice message and all, but it would be more powerful if you were a better writer...
 
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ilovedayna said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 9:00 pm:
i think you're headed the right direction with your writing, just bring it closer, describe more about what's going on. put yourself in it more. it sounds like you needed to jump into the situation more. Show your feelings and exaggerate some, too.
 
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