Stop The Violence This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

   Drugs all over under the ground.
Guns, people crying, putting each otherdown.
People every day do crazy things.
Buying fancy cars and a lot ofrings.
You have nothing to show for yourself.
You're dying on the inside,and you have bad health.
I wonder what the community can do.
I have noidea, not even a clue.
I look in the paper and I see someone dead.
They layon the stretcher like it was a bed.
The mothers stand in silence.
Peopleshould think TO STOP THE VIOLENCE!!!

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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IMjustTht said...
Sept. 29, 2016 at 3:41 pm
who ever created this did an amazing job and should be a writer or it should be published in something but very good job to whom it may concern.
DeadlyConcerns said...
May 7, 2015 at 8:20 pm
If A world without violence existed, there would be no people in it. That would be because even the people who believe in violence believe they are right. The people against violence think they are in the right, but no one tells either which side is right because both sides are made up of people. The same people who make the laws and the same people who believe they are right.You are talented though. I hope the magazine prints your poem in the issue this month
MissEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2015 at 12:44 pm
This is absolutely, powerful and amazing and true. We should stop the violence. I love that it your poem has honesty and rawness and truth and bravery and strength and beauty in it; and just so much. I'm not sure sure how to explain it, but your poem is powerful and wonderful and has lot in it. You have such talent and greatness and light and a beauty that is your own; and so much. You're an amazing and talented and beautiful writer and person. All of this and just so much more. Thank you so... (more »)
sunniesk said...
Jul. 3, 2014 at 8:40 am
good idea for the poem, a bit better composition needed
bioncaj1982 said...
May 14, 2014 at 10:57 pm
This poem was oiriginally written by me I don't know what happened cause chunksof thepoem are taken out and also bunched together next time I'll know to be more careful of whom I let read my work.
jenni said...
May 7, 2014 at 5:15 pm
i now wath violence feels bicues i have gon true all of  does stuff but  i have a very good canceler that always one my sid to help me wiht vilence or bully . Does are  reasons why i love  your poem and thers no wone in this world that as not ever ben by bully or vilence and my school were my favorite canceler is in Burleson Elementry  her name is MRS.maguare goo poem and bye text me rate now  
C.neisha said...
Mar. 15, 2014 at 9:21 am
Pretty good poem overall....just a few grammar mistakes I shall say. Be sure to reread before posting.
KingFoe said...
Nov. 3, 2013 at 8:20 pm
to me the message isn't exactly clear but the poem flows well. I just wish that it was looked over because all the words are mushed together which distracts from the message and poem. And even if it is cliche, and I guess it is a little, cliche doesn't mean bad. Not all of the poem goes together kind of as in it feels like i'm reading two poems that were put together that have similar meanings. So yes, I think it needs work but most poems do. Overall, good job.
ElizaD This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 30, 2013 at 6:08 pm
This poem is terrible. Its cleche and needs major edits. If it was refined, it could be good. If your wondering why it is published in the magazine, its because you guys kept on commenting. Im sure the poet could have done much much better. I think this poem would best be put in a slam format in the future 
princesse said...
Jul. 16, 2013 at 5:13 pm
I love your article and i also agree with what you wrote. everything rymes so perfectly! :}
sarah98 said...
Jul. 16, 2013 at 4:33 pm
i love the message, but it's kind of choppy and there's a few grammer issues...with a few more drafts, this poem would be fantastic. 3 stars
StarGazer9 said...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 4:26 pm
Guys, it's a good poem with a good message. Plus don't just say what's wrong about it, give advice.
Gage1121 said...
May 11, 2013 at 12:58 am
great poem i really like it. if you guys cud please check out mine :)
GilliamLINA said...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 8:21 pm
Houses are expensive and not every person can buy it. Nevertheless, credit loans was created to help different people in such hard situations.
EmoScreamer said...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 12:03 pm
 omg i love tjis. i think the same thing but i dont see aanyone tryna do anythign to stop it.
the ogee said...
Feb. 26, 2013 at 12:25 pm
i loved it
SapphireLamour said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 4:13 pm
Was it meant to have no spaces in between some words or was that a grammar mistake?
Ace007 said...
Jan. 26, 2013 at 4:36 pm
Nice poem. A couple of grammar mistakes need to be corrected, though, and I think the poem's rhyme sceme is a little off (last two lines are different in syllable length). Otherwise, it's alright.
CTS207 said...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 1:54 pm
Great poem, a thumb up for the topic, but I pray the editors fixed the grammar.
theatregirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 5:22 pm
good idea, but it was very un expressive. Plus, I feel like it an like you did the usauly over use, voilence is not answer poetry trope. It was unorginal, however not the bigest problem. most writing aren't. but on top of being unorginal, it was poorly exucate and boring. Over all this is a first draft, not really a finish product. Reach beyong the norm, and try to do a different spend. But, keep writing.
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