If I kissed you...

March 20, 2012
By KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown


Summary:

The killer turned his head to me, his dark, chiseled face giving me a small grin. “I'm going to kill your weak little boyfriend.” he breathed, trying to get me to react. I did, not caring, shaking my head no, pleading with my eyes.
“Hah!” he laughed at me and wrapped his large hands around John's throat. Tears streamed down my face. “NO! NO!”
And then the shears were planted into his shoulder. He let out a roar of anger as he fell back, off John his head landing near my feet. I raised my feet and landed them, hard as I could on his skull. His head re-vibrated off the floor boards and settled back as his eyes slowly closed. John ran to me ripping off the tape, I screamed from the pain. “John he's tied us all up! Get the shears, baby, get the shears!”


Katherine A.

If I kissed you...


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WingWizard13 said...
on Apr. 17 2015 at 1:14 pm
WingWizard13, Harmonsburg, Pa, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your love makes me strong, your hate makes me unstoppable"
-Cristiano Ronaldo

Wow. I read this book in a few days. And it's amazing! You're a great writer! Keep it up. Let me know if you've written any others or are planning to. Again, great job.

on Mar. 6 2015 at 9:44 am
dolphingirl67, Tea SD, South Dakota
0 articles 0 photos 9 comments
I luv this book I couldn't put it down I don't usually read thriller books but this one was different it was action packed I couldn't put it down you really are a great writer

on Mar. 5 2014 at 10:49 am
Samantha_Lynn_Burke SILVER, Jefferson, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always do what you're afraid to do

So I'm only on page 10 and so far, I can't put my laptop down! This is great so far!!!!  

on Jan. 4 2014 at 1:48 pm
_Isabelle_ BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 12 comments
This book is like one of mine. Somewhat different. very Good though its awesome. I like the way you worded it.

KateLA GOLD said...
on May. 9 2013 at 1:11 am
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Thank you so much!

on May. 1 2013 at 2:27 pm
OliveTreeLover BRONZE, Brandon, Vermont
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments
Great Book!!!!!!!!!!!

KateLA GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 9:55 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Thanky you very much, let me know if you would like me to return the favor and comment on some of your articles, and whether there are any spesific poems you might want me to take a look at :-)

on Apr. 29 2013 at 5:13 am
Jackiee36 PLATINUM, Reading, Other
27 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Aim for the moon so even if you miss you'll still be among the stars

Your story is amazing, i only post poems on teenink but may post some of my novels in future, I would love to be as good as you, your so talented and personally this is the best thriller I've read!!! Xx

KateLA GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 3:28 am
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Thank you so much! Let me know if you would like me to return the favor and comment on one of your articles, just leave your screen name and the article you would like me to comment on :-)

. said...
on Apr. 3 2013 at 8:01 pm
This was absoulutly amazing!! I couldn't put it down! It was awesome. My heart was beating the entire time! My stomach was making the little flip-flops!! I loved it!! Keep writing!

on Apr. 3 2013 at 7:29 pm
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette

lol thanks. i just replied to your comment. well keep writing :)

KateLA GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2013 at 9:28 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Sure, I'd love to return the favor :-)

KateLA GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2013 at 8:56 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Don't worry about your title :-), mine's the one that sounds really weird, lol. I'll leave a comment!

on Apr. 2 2013 at 11:54 am
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette

you're welcome. if you could read my story "falling in love..." yeah lol ik i hate the title but i couldnt think of anything when i posted it. thanks :) keep writing:)

Nimra Shaikh said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 3:12 pm
That would be so sweet!!! Thank you :D

KateLA GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 1:26 am
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Thank you! If you would like me to return the favor and comment on one of your stories just let me know which one you would prefer, I'd be happy to.

KateLA GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 1:22 am
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Thank you very much, if there's any specific article you want me to comment on just let me know which one :-)

Nimra BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2013 at 5:10 pm
Nimra BRONZE, New York, New York
2 articles 0 photos 25 comments
This story is so frightening and catching that I coudln't put it down, Katherine!!! You'll turn out to be a very good writer very soon!!! :D Best of Luck!!!

on Mar. 18 2013 at 10:48 am
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette

this is incredible and astonishing. i was terrified for the life of the characters, the whole time feeling appreciation for your writing skills. i was captivated by the thrill. u are waaaayy talented. keep writing :)

KateLA GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2013 at 8:03 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

Thank you so much your comment made my day :-)


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