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Blue Moon Lounge

May 13, 2014
By joshiank000 BRONZE, Woodridge, Illinois
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The beauty here is deep
The liquor holds a certain taste
The culture reeks of beer and meat
Every girl is tipsy and laced

The room smells like crap
Mice flood the floor
The only dance is on a lap
This place is rotten to the core

I still love it
This place is my home
My heart lies with the grit
There is no need for a comb

© Sean C., Princeton, IL

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