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December 3, 2009
By MinorMistakes PLATINUM, Columbia, South Carolina
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never lose what you have but gain what is lost

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id try and guide away for you
but every time you'd fall right
though.
i'd try to come and save the day
but find myself caught up some way
the alley ways of this avenue
congest the thought of making it to
you . i cant keep living life this way.

© Adria O., Edgewood, WA

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Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 8:11 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.