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To Care

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

We set ourselves apart,
We seal our ears,
And close our hearts.
We sin their sin,
Yet we ignore the burden,
And hide it within.
We claim to care,
Still we hide the gift,
We were meant to share.
We refuse to obey,
We deny our purpose,
And push God away.
Our hearts need to break,
For all the lost souls,
We can't just forsake.

The author's comments:
Too many Christians hide in church and fail to witness to others. So I hope this encourages more people to share their faith in love and help others find the one and only way to heaven...

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This article has 24 comments.

kila said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 11:44 am
on everything that poem was the business. i write poems too ya' know.

Alexx627 said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:43 pm
Alexx627, Moline, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you do what you did then you'll get what you got

Vry nice...well written like everyone of your others're vry talented!

on Oct. 19 2009 at 7:25 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Love this! It's so meaningful! And I totally agree with you, we should share with everyone! Your poetry is absolutely spectacular!

on Oct. 19 2009 at 2:01 pm
ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD, Belfast, Other
19 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Miles to go before I sleep'
- Robert Frost

very, very well written,

and a very good point might i add.

and thanks for commenting on my poems.