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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.

The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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unicorns97 GOLD, Mt Zion, Illinois
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I have felt this do many times. This is an amazing!

Zeeshan BRONZE said...
on May. 1 2015 at 11:25 am
Zeeshan BRONZE, Karachi, Other
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I can surely relate. Its pretty sad. Amazing peice of work!

on Apr. 27 2015 at 4:54 pm
NoNamer0102 BRONZE, Providence Forge, Virginia
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“Where there's hope, there's life. It fills us with fresh courage and makes us strong again.”
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That was nice

. said...
on Mar. 4 2015 at 9:35 am
How pretty!

on Mar. 2 2015 at 5:16 am
this isn't a sonnet

on Feb. 26 2015 at 1:13 pm
Gabbyyirene GOLD, Winter Garden, Florida
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This is my life.

on Feb. 19 2015 at 9:07 pm
I totally related to this sadly .

RealRiter GOLD said...
on Feb. 18 2015 at 3:20 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
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"I did not fail 101 times, but I simply found 101 ways that did not work." -Thomas Edison

Nice! This is such a good poem!

GGauns said...
on Feb. 2 2015 at 11:36 am
GGauns, Ponda, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'We cannot choose to get hurt in this world. But, we do have some say in choosing what can hurt us.'

Describes exactly how I feel. Really good. Can you read mine and comment??

AustinR BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2015 at 10:57 am
AustinR BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Gorgeous, simply so well written. The sadness from this experience seeps through the words. Any of use who can relate immediately fell in love with this piece. Again, an amazing piece.

shiin said...
on Jan. 20 2015 at 9:47 am
It's A Verry NicE !! ReLate Mutch :)
I Like This Poem ! <3

on Jan. 18 2015 at 6:36 pm
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a sonnet is a 14 line poem that rhymes :)

on Jan. 17 2015 at 12:25 am
nelehjr DIAMOND, Lingle, Wyoming
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Beautiful. So sad though...

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on Jan. 7 2015 at 8:00 am
wilds PLATINUM, Newfane, New York
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on Jan. 5 2015 at 2:08 am
kennedyshine PLATINUM, Corte Madera, California
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The perpetual pursuit for an unattainable freedom

I'm confused why this isn't in the magazine

DLove BRONZE said...
on Dec. 31 2014 at 11:26 am
DLove BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Life is not about how good it is, but how good you make it

This is a very inspirational sonnet, not hard at all to relate to

Paakhi said...
on Dec. 24 2014 at 6:54 am
It's beautiful :) I love this poem

on Dec. 17 2014 at 6:33 pm
@Westiera thanks so much, I love writing poems but don't know very many types of poems I keep the rules of poems in a notebook I use for writing prompts. This was a big help, I googled Quatrains and couplets and wrote down how many lines and 3 common rhyme schemes for the couplets and what open and closed couplets were.

on Dec. 11 2014 at 6:30 pm
Your sonnet was very good. Im getting some inspriataion from it as well. I had the same thing happen to me. I met up with my best-friend and she wasnt the same. She walked different, talked differnt but the thing I noticed the most was her additude. She treated me like I was her butler and I didnt like it. The girl I used to know, was gone.

on Nov. 17 2014 at 10:42 am
BlackNek0 BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
“I don't think..." then you shouldn't talk, said the Hatter.” ― Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland

I like your sonnet its verry now. Many peots have started leaving the iambic pentamete and the rules. if you searched online you would find many famous poets not fallowing poetic rules one inculding shakespear himself. Your poem had feeling that is all that matters.