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Brain Stain

July 25, 2011
By JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
It is what it is


My mother always told me "your a thinker, use your brain," but every time I think to hard it causes me great pain. I tried to tell my dad but he just told me not to strain he said its just a thing in life your brain just has a stain.

The author's comments:
Shirts get stains shoes gets stains and believe it or not your brain get a stain. the technical term for this is Cognitive Distortion.

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on Aug. 21 2011 at 1:07 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

very cool and interesting!!!!! Awesome.

on Aug. 3 2011 at 3:48 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

This reminds me of Shel Silverstein!!!! Very good, it flowed very well!!!!!!!! :D

on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:11 pm
callmebaddog SILVER, Spokane, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today.
-James Dean

Very nicely worded, very thoughtful and put together! :)

on Aug. 2 2011 at 4:00 pm
HannSawyer15 BRONZE, North Brunswick, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I say... lets speak it. Lets fight it. Lets write it. There's nothing to hold on to if it's already gone."

I actually really liked this... it's really nice how it's short too. But it also leaves the window to expand if you wanted to. Either way it's good!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 2:51 pm
marissa87 BRONZE, Glenmoore, Pennsylvania
4 articles 3 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is popular is not always right and what is right is not always popular

nice:) i think it is very good.

WiseGirl said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 7:17 pm
WiseGirl, Adams, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I think, therefore I am."
-Rene Decartes

Very good!

 


wasps said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 1:57 pm
wasps, Other
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I like this one, how you compared it to everyday things. I really do hope that your Cognitive Distortion gets better, though like I said, the most quirky (I'm not sure if that is the right word ... do you know what I mean though??) are the best authors/artists/etc ... :)

on Jul. 30 2011 at 8:37 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I know that sometimes the formatting in Teen Ink sucks so I won't go for it. Anyway, your a thinker should be you're a thinker and to hard should be too hard. its just a thing should be it's just a thing. Overall, this poem is kinda funny and so, kudos for that. :)))