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Didn't We Have It All?

February 6, 2011
By Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
29 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed."
-Ernest Hemingway


Right from the start,
It was your eyes that captured my heart,
as beautiful as the sky,
Oh and i didnt know why,
But i was so scared.

I'd never fallen this hard
Before you walked through me door,
Oh and i've fallen apart,
Because i knew i was doomed from the start,
Your footsteps they matched the beating of my heart.

(chorus)
And didn't we have it all?
Didn't we have it all?
I thought everything was perfect,
But obviously we weren't worth it.
And didn't we have it all?
Didn't we have it all?
Oh we were so perfect,
everything was so perfect.

Then i woke up,
and nothing was perfect
Oh-oh Perfect
And you weren't there,
i was so scared.
Did i imagine it all?
Or did i really fall?
Head over heals,
Asking if love feels
Like this for everyone
Oh for everyone,

N'da da dat dat da,
N'da da dat dat da,
oh oh oh ooh oooh,

And Didnt we have it all?
Didnt we have it all?
Wasn't life so worth it?
Actin' like we were perfect?

But then i woke up,
And it was so dark,
Because nothing was really perfect,
And without you life's not worth it!
We never had it all,
You left me to fall,
And left me to pick up the pieces,
The tiny broken pieces,
All.

On.

My.

Own.


The author's comments:
its pretty self explanatory.

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on Feb. 26 2011 at 7:55 pm
Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
29 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed."
-Ernest Hemingway

Thank you very much that means an immence ammount to me :DD ty again

on Feb. 12 2011 at 8:19 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 367 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

Very nice job. I liked how the sentances sort of flowed by; everything was really smooth. Congratulations, I give you two thumbs up! This is amazing, and I'm glad I had the chance to read it!

jasso GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 9:42 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
16 articles 10 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

wahahahaw

no really that was incredible !!!!!!i really liked it the way the scentences flew , anyway can you see my poem let me know what you think about it its ( in love dusk)