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I’m so tired MAG

January 25, 2011
By mariewonderlandx SILVER, Rochester Hills, Michigan
mariewonderlandx SILVER, Rochester Hills, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

I'm so tired
That I'd feast upon the dreams of
the sleeping,
Just to feel them all seeping
Through my darkened veins.
Oh, twisted soul,
enraptured!
Claws dug deep within.
Sew them in and tie the knots good.
Eradication of memories,
Left to perish in the dolor of us.

I'm so tired,
That I'd let the screams sing me to sleep.
Every night I'd cry in my wake,
Awoken by the nightmare of you
drowning me in the lake.
And for you to think that everything
is alright.
You make me choke.
If only you could feel this.

I'm so tired,
That I'd take the sleep from the grave,
So I could wash away what he gave
To me.
They will never be able to stop the
epidemic from spreading
This putrid rot of all that he is.
He is worthy of the plague itself.
Sick tales of lust and love.
He is nothing more than flesh and gore.
And nothing more than a vision.

I'm so tired
That I'd drink the dreams of the innocent.
Just so I could remember
And refresh to the very last December.


The author's comments:
Inspired by a sick relationship that I would never wish upon anyone.

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CeceE14 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2015 at 5:19 pm
CeceE14 BRONZE, Rosemount, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"No."

This is so great! I can almost feel what you're talking about... I hop e that boy is put in his place!

teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 10:19 am
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
1 article 0 photos 49 comments

"I'm so tired,
That I'd let the screams sing me to sleep."
I can relate to it. I like it.

keep writing :)


on Jan. 17 2012 at 1:06 am
mariewonderlandx SILVER, Rochester Hills, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Thank you very much! I truly appreciate it :)

on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:45 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 769 comments
Great job! This was very deep! Could you check out some of my work? Thanks and keep writing! :)(:

on Nov. 21 2011 at 9:20 pm
mariewonderlandx SILVER, Rochester Hills, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Thank you!

dreamgazer12 said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 8:44 pm
dreamgazer12, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tough times don't last, but tough people do"
-ananymous running quote

wow! you captured me from the first line. you twisted your emotions into something smooth and readable. keep writeing! :)

Blaker GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 5:45 pm
Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
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Anytime! I'd love it if you read some of my things. I have some poems and photographs that are still being loaded or evaluated or whatever. Those are the better ones. But yeah, I'm blathering....

on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:33 pm
mariewonderlandx SILVER, Rochester Hills, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Thank you very much!  I really appreciate it :)

Blaker GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 2:25 pm
Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
15 articles 9 photos 38 comments
Such great sentiment. I love this! Really, really fantastic!