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You Are Not Mr. Right

January 4, 2011
By Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

Your load of bullcrap's like no other,
You think I'm smart,
I know you're dumb.
You were all I ever wanted,
Summed up in one person,
You blew it all away for her.
I hope you two are miserable,
I hope she cheats on you,
I hope that she leaves you for another.
Maybe your heart will hurt,
Maybe your eyes will water,
All I can say is you deserve it.
You lead me to believe,
I was your one and only,
Only to find out you lied.
I wish I could make you feel,
The same pain I did.
But the only way to do that is,
Let you watch me stand tall.

The author's comments:
Relationships are over-rated... lol

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on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:55 am
singinginthegardn GOLD, Cowell, Massachusetts
16 articles 2 photos 158 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anaïs Nin

Loved the ending, great job :)

on Feb. 3 2011 at 12:21 pm

It takes a real person to post this...

... Hope all goes well for ya' (:

on Jan. 26 2011 at 7:57 am
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
48 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat

I'm sorry for this happeend to you. Realationships are bullock. As well.


Keep up the good work. ^^

I ask once more of one thing...if you can look at my writing. Rate it/coment, it does not matter.

veronique said...
on Jan. 25 2011 at 5:03 pm
I LOVED the last line of this! that is so true(: you deserve way better than him!

lollypops GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 6:30 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
16 articles 5 photos 218 comments

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  i loved this the last sentence was great and keep writing