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I'm Losing You

October 29, 2010
By Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are, and say what you feel, becuase those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

I'm losing ground, i'm losing the taste of sweetness on my tongue, I'm losing it all, everything I had.

It's replaced with rain on my fingertips.

There's nothing left to sing for, no words burn in my mouth, there's nothing there.

I'm losing breath, i'm losing the taste of sunshine on your skin, i'm losing my mind, i'm missing something

from the past, it won't come back.

It's replaced with fog in the moonlight.

I'm not sure what i'm here for, its dim like pouring rain, there's no more sun.

I'm losing love, i'm losing the taste of victory forever, its like it never happened, its an illusion, its an


It's perfect if perfection heals the flaws.

Passion takes the apathy, but venom takes the love, there goes the sun.

I'm losing you.....

The author's comments:
I've seen this in people's Eyes. I know how much it hurts.

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This article has 1 comment.

J.Bomstad said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 2:38 pm
i feel the same... i lost a girl friend not to long ago, she dont trust me anymore becouse she heard rumors about me and im losing her cuz of it, by the way i love this poem...