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Too good to be true

July 12, 2010
By Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go big or go home


She always says yes

it's never a maybe

i love when she holds me close

and calls me baby

When i tell her i love her

i can see her eyes glow

as we lay in her yard

waist deep in snow

We talk about the future

and how we'll run away

leave our families behind

and be together every day

we decide to do it

we'll run away tomorrow

to end all our pain

and end all our sorrow

as we lay under the stars

i begin to feel weak

i pull her close to my chest

and kiss her on the cheek

she looks up and smiles

and we both begin to blush

i hold her even tighter

as our lips start to touch

It's too good to be true

i start to feel alive

this unbelievable feeling

no word can describe

but the feeling starts to fade

what is going on?

what happened to my girl?

where did i go wrong?

Tears run down my face

When i wake to the alarm

It was all just a dream
And she was never in my arms...



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on Aug. 11 2010 at 12:06 pm
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go big or go home

really?! thanks:)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 5:36 pm
mary.brodeur BRONZE, Westerly, Rhode Island
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"Cause sometimes you just need to throw yourself a party."

This is really sweet...you're wicked talented :)

on Aug. 9 2010 at 8:53 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

THis is sooo amazing!! i love it!! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!