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inseperable

July 11, 2010
By Angelica Huitzil PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Oregon
Angelica Huitzil PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Oregon
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oh boy you took me the first time I heard your voice
you stole my heart I knew you would be my first choice
when we danced i think i fell for you
and i knew that they wouldnt get it, they would have no clue

my parents didnt approve, but I wasn't going to lose
we layed side by side and you said, what do we do? I really cant lose you
I thought and said the first thing that came to mind
we act like every time we see each other is our last
and we put all our fights in the past

nothing could come between us
and all that mattered was our love
and every time we saw each other
we pretended it was our last

and we just walked like nothing was wrong
even though I havent seen you in so long
but we held up because
we are inseperable
our love is invincible
and when I see you, you'r so incredible

It's been to long
but it seems like yesterday I fell for your love
yesterday you said nothing would come between us, nothing is wrong
'cause you'r all I need, sent from up above
your the only person that gets me
but why cant they just see

that we are inceperable
our love is invincible
and when I see you, your so incredible

so take my heart I'll take your hand
walk like nothings wrong, it might be hard
dont listen to what they say
even if our love is banned
so take my hand I'll take your heart


The author's comments:
i wrote this because i miss my boyfriend so much and my parents wont let me see him and i love him so much

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on Aug. 11 2010 at 1:31 pm
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face"
"no one ever drown in their own sweat"

wow i felt the emotion put into this it is amazing!!

on Aug. 9 2010 at 8:26 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

THis is so emotional!! its amazing and so professional!! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!

on Aug. 9 2010 at 5:29 am
Jenny10216 SILVER, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I Know Right

 BEAUTIFUL, IT SHOULD BE IN THE MAGAZINE!As i read it I coulD feel all tHE emotion that you put into tHis.KEEP WRITING CANT WAIT UNTILL THIS SONG ISCPUT ON THE RADIO & IS BLOWING UP YOUTUBE.

on Aug. 6 2010 at 7:13 pm
ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's gonna be some stuff u gonna see that's gonna make it hard To smile in the future, but through whatever you see, Through all the rain and all the pain, you gotta keep your sense of humor. you gotta be able to smile through all this bull~"~tupac

this is an awsome poem!!!!it shows how much you care bout your boyfriend & how you dnt care what ppl are saying about yall's love.....