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Dance with me

April 30, 2010
By Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror


The day I saw u with her
Was the day I knew u weren’t mine
That was the last time I talked to
And the last u crossed my mind
Until the night u walked up to me
and said Will u dance me
It won’t me a thing
She ain’t here And you are
SO will u dance with me
pretty pretty please
Now when u see me in the hall
U look at me and smile
When ur talking to her
U still look straight at me
And it all happened when u said
Will you dance with me
It won’t mean a thing
She ain’t here and you are
So will u dance with me
Pretty pretty Please
Just dance with me


The author's comments:
its not finished but its a start

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on Apr. 8 2011 at 4:12 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

thanks if only i could finish it

on Apr. 4 2011 at 1:26 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

yeah, this sounds like a really kool start- i really like it :) its interesting

on Aug. 14 2010 at 10:57 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

the whole next verse

on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:50 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

Well wat is it you need help with?

on Jul. 31 2010 at 9:29 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

ok then well i still can't think of anything

on Jul. 16 2010 at 12:41 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

No problem

 


on Jul. 16 2010 at 2:16 am
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

thanks alot

on Jul. 13 2010 at 9:11 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

Ok well sorry thought i replied. If you need anyhelp just send me a text messsage at 6303350532

on Jun. 23 2010 at 5:40 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

idk but i dont know how to finish it i have tried a lot of things

on Jun. 22 2010 at 5:41 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

your welcome but how do i help you?

on Jun. 22 2010 at 3:14 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

thanks cause i cant think of anything

on Jun. 12 2010 at 6:54 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

Ok i"ll help you.

on Jun. 11 2010 at 5:03 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

i will keep wirteing if u help me finish this piece

on Jun. 9 2010 at 8:53 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

I like that name its pretty. But you should keep writing kaitlyn your writing is awesome. :D keep writing pleaseeee. My name is Lawrence

on Jun. 9 2010 at 8:41 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

Most of my friends say i should keep writeing and singing but i dont agree by the way my name is Kaitlyn

on Jun. 9 2010 at 12:48 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

Not even. yours is way better

on Jun. 9 2010 at 12:19 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

no its not urs is way better

on Jun. 8 2010 at 6:49 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

why? your writing is amazing

on Jun. 8 2010 at 11:56 am
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

i doubt it

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:31 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

 Not really