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playing with knifes

October 19, 2009
By Madeline.Pearl PLATINUM, Smithville, Texas
Madeline.Pearl PLATINUM, Smithville, Texas
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Doll, stop your falling
its just a dream
your not going to hit the ground
Please Don't Scream

Im here to rescue you
why soo confused
you knew i was here
maybe not i fear

Friends dont let friends
play pretend
with knifes.
and medication

Dont go to far
dont hurt yourself hun
its not fun
to watch... this Totrture

your life not that bad
maybe its a drag
but not worth this
here


Saveing all my tears for you
wateing to get blue
cause of you

Im here to rescue you
why soo confused
you knew i was here
maybe not i fear

Please stop playing with knife
ruining your life
do it for me
Please

The author's comments:
This song is short.. yes but it had meaning behind it

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hurtangel said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 2:29 pm
dude this was freaking amazing. maybe it takes a true cutter to realize what the writer's meaning was. keep writing madeline and plz dont let any1 get in ur way of writing. this song truely touched me. luv ur writin! byez!!!

on Feb. 7 2010 at 7:38 pm
horseluva BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
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i thought it was awesome! why all yall hatinyall must be too closed minded to see the real meaning behind this song,

DylanDawg said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 1:20 pm
Wow, just reading this made me wanna slit my wrists, vertically. Seriously dude, you suck....

on Nov. 3 2009 at 9:20 pm
Madeline.Pearl PLATINUM, Smithville, Texas
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I know you are... wow that was Lame like a third grader joke..

on Nov. 2 2009 at 12:27 pm
GAY GAY GAY SERIOUSLY DUDE GAY !!!!

on Nov. 1 2009 at 5:13 pm
**alwaysbeme** BRONZE, Valparaiso, Indiana
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That was Great

on Oct. 28 2009 at 4:06 pm
Madeline.Pearl PLATINUM, Smithville, Texas
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Wow. Thank you! im surprised that someone even read my stupid thing.

random kid said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 11:01 am
i really like this song. i have friends that cut and i hate to hear about it. i dont think less of them at all but i just wish they would stop hurting themselfs.