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I Remember...

October 12, 2009
By ohmy_chelsie SILVER, Lawrenceburg, Indiana
ohmy_chelsie SILVER, Lawrenceburg, Indiana
7 articles 1 photo 4 comments

No one was watching and no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway
and everyone could see as she stepped out of the car
that she hit just a little too too hard

the girls in the back were crying out they're dying
their bodies meshed with the car
you could tell they were hit just a little too too hard

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway

I remember the day like it was yesterday
I can hear the squeal of the tires
and the ghost of the screams
the crying out loud
the bust of the seams
they all went flying flying
so high on life but they were dying dying

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway

and everyone could see as she stepped out of the car
that she hit just a little too too hard
but what does it matter anyway

the rain poured down
as the night crept in
they closed their eyes for the final time
making a wish and holding each other tight
but what does it matter anyway

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway

The author's comments:
May 9 2008 I lost a very dear friend in a car accident. We were childhood best friend and then we started to grow apart but just before she died we started getting close again. I remember the last day she was alive. She smiled at me. and screamed HEY CHELSIES BACK. And then on that rainy foggy night She and another girl died in the car accident. The driver walked away with her life but is she really living anymore?
any way yeah this piece is important to me.

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on Apr. 10 2012 at 8:38 am
CaitlynCase BRONZE, Napoleon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Death before dreams..."

awee :(

Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 8:26 am
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

This piece was amazing! It has so much hurt, heart, sadness, and love in it! I am SSSSOOOOO sorry about your friend! May she rest in peace

on Jan. 13 2012 at 2:33 am
kate12345me GOLD, Sydney, Other
11 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth." - Thoreau
"Sometimes you're flush and sometimes you're bust, and when you're up, it's never as good as it seems, and when you're down, you never think you'll be up again, but life goes on."

I tried to work out a random tune to this - that's how well-written it was. I think this was less about the actual accident and more about losing her. I know how it feels when someone 'goes away' and this was very heart-wrenching. From, a deeply affected 13-year-old. P.S. May she Rest In Peace. xo

magickMuse said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 3:24 pm
i loved this piece my friend died in a car accident and i get it. your work is amazing everything was right on

on Sep. 3 2011 at 10:27 pm
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
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I had to sing this song, but while I did, I cried.

on Apr. 2 2011 at 6:00 pm
summermarrie BRONZE, Tobyhanna,pa, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
live well laugh offten love much.... cry less love alot be happy... if you love something or someone so much let it go if it comes back it was ment to be....

bout ur lost ilove this it touched myy heart

 


on Dec. 13 2010 at 11:39 am
horselove146 GOLD, Scituate, Massachusetts
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Wow, that's great..  &'d so sad..  Sorry for your loss.

on Nov. 12 2010 at 8:08 am
♥USCgirl♥, Bamberg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I can accept failer, everyone fails at something, but I can not accept not trying"

Wow I know how you feel! One of my good friends died in a car crash and it was terrible! This is an amazing piece!

Maddy23 said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 6:13 pm
this is amazing. im sorry for  your loss. on April 10th 2010 my Friend Shelby died. her and her sister was playing and her sister crossed the street and Shelby thought she could make it over but a car mirror just hit her head. and she had to be rushed to the hospital.

on Sep. 16 2010 at 7:25 pm
This is such a beautiful peice! I loved reading it! Im very sorry about your friend, and i kno what she would be very proud of you for writing such an amazing piece like this one! keep on writing

hellogirl GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 10:42 am
hellogirl GOLD, La Habra, California
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Omg! Im really, really sorry about ur loss it must be sad for you to have gone thrue this for a best friend and for the poem it is a sad one but I can see that it has a meaning and that you expressed urself.

on Aug. 25 2010 at 9:07 am
meganwagner21 PLATINUM, Old Bridge, New Jersey
42 articles 0 photos 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes good things have to fall apart so better things can fall together." -Marilyn Monroe
"Nobody can go back and make a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending." -Maria Robinson

wow relly personal. sorry about ur loss

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 3:29 pm
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Wow... Im sorry for your loss, I liked the chorus and the emphasis.

Check out some of my songs and see what you think?


WSRA said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 8:21 am
This was sad and touching!!!

Mr.Mills said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 8:09 am

Hey thats sad it must of took a lot of heart to right that and i truly am sorry for your lost.

 


on Jul. 12 2010 at 7:25 pm
JustBreathe BRONZE, Peachland, Other
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It made me cry.  it actually did.  i'm still crying.  IT WAS SO WELL WRITEN.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 8:25 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

It was deep, and so sad!! I am so sorry for your lost! I know how its like when you lose a very close person.. Im sorry..

 

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on May. 7 2010 at 9:23 pm
Wit_and_Envy PLATINUM, Salem, Oregon
21 articles 0 photos 5 comments
It was very deep and I could feel your loss.

Jesus Lover said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 9:21 am
Wow my eyes watered a bit. I feel bad for you!

on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:41 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

not everything one does after a friend dies makes sense geet over it...no offence though


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