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Criticize me

October 2, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


My life is crazy just like spinnin’ round in circles,
‘Cause I’m that type of girl that paints my nails purple.
It may be black, cause I like it like that,
I don’t wear those crazy colors, no, and that’s a fact.
If you wanna come & get me,
Then I’m open & I’m ready.
I have a thing for competitions,
It’s like the main source of my missions.

Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x
I don’t care if you wanna criticize me,
I’ll take your dirty words, and put it right behind me.
You might think I’m a little crazy, but that’s ok,
‘Cause I don’t really care, what you have to say.
Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x

I have one confession that I really wanna make,
I’ll try to start a band, no matter what it takes.
I’ll try to be the best that I can be,
And then one day, you all we see.
That I’m ok, really, yes-I-am,
I’m just regular teen with dreams and a plan.
I just try, and oh, its really hard,
Cause i only ask for one thing and its takin’ so long.

Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x
I don’t care if you wanna criticize me,
I’ll take your dirty words, and put it right behind me.
You might think I’m a little crazy, but that’s ok,
‘Cause I don’t really care, what you have to say.
Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x

I’m not conceited, I only want one thing,
To be in the spot light and oh, just sing.

Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x
I don’t care if you wanna criticize me,
I’ll take your dirty words, and put it right behind me.
You might think I’m a little crazy, but that’s ok,
‘Cause I don’t really care, what you have to say.
Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x

I said!

I don’t care if you wanna criticize me,
I’ll take your dirty words, and put it right behind me.
You might think I’m a little crazy, but that’s ok,
‘Cause I don’t really care, what you have to say.
Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x


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i know many people have gone through this experience b4:)

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Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2012 at 9:47 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thank you guys so much for all the wonderful feed back. i really appreciate it :) i'll have some more of my work on tumblr (thandielove13.tumblr.com)

on Oct. 6 2012 at 1:30 pm
MusicallyInclinedx22x, Willingboro, New Jersey
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Yo this is awesome. I love it

on May. 24 2012 at 5:33 am

hey you - love the song, super cute.

i was thinking of actually using the bulk of your lyrics and recording a song. before i do it i wanted to ask your permission and see if it was ok?

-w


Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 3:09 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thank you :)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 3:08 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thanks alot :D

Alexa19 said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 6:56 pm
Alexa19, Blaine, Minnesota
0 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dance like no one is watching,
Sing like no one is listening,
Love like you've never been hurt,
And live like it's heaven on Earth

That's really cute! I truly enjoyed it!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:48 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

I LOVEEEE this soo much! i think everyone can relate to this! keep doing what you do.

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 12:38 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thanks love:] and sure no prob

on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:07 pm
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
3 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

I can relate to this song so well! LOVE THIS! Comment on my first song posted here?

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 10:23 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks alot :]

mikey123 said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 8:23 am

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 

awsome <3 it :)


Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 11:23 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

THANKS SO MUCH [single tear of happiness :D]

on Jan. 19 2011 at 8:25 am
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
6 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
--Edgar Allan Poe.


I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
--Edgar Allan Poe

wow i love this one it's wonderful i can relate.. you should go for it make your own band sing your songs.. i want to hear them on the radio..

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 5:19 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks everyone for the complliments but i dont want to write lyrics for other people. i wanna sing these songs myself:) i have a voice

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 2:32 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks alot

Emilia901 GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 8:16 pm
Emilia901 GOLD, Moreno Valley, California
11 articles 4 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures." Jessamyn West

Wow, your song was really awesome and honestly, it was truly inspirational. If I pictured anyone singing it would probably be  Hayley Williams =^_^= Good job!

on Jul. 15 2010 at 1:42 pm
everthought BRONZE, Vancouver, Other
1 article 13 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"forever is the new now"
-anonymous

wow this is so...teeny-bopper-ish you know? you could be writing lyrics for miley cyrus, even. It's your choice if you consider this comment a compliment or not ;)

on Mar. 18 2010 at 8:40 am
Bella913 SILVER, New City, New York
5 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death is easy, living is harder."

i love this song!! it relates to so many people in this century. thanks and keep writing

on Feb. 1 2010 at 5:54 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

very good. I like this song.

Goooood said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:30 pm
I loved it and it was like the story of my life