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Hell.

July 9, 2010
By SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."


When I met you,
When you caught my eye,
All of the chaos and sadness passed by…
And it felt like a dream come true,
Like you were my angel
Sent to save me from the darkness in which I fell…
Looking into your eyes I hope with all that I am that our love will last,
But then I remember my past…
And I fear that once the entire story is told,
You will leave and find someone less messed up to hold…
And there is nothing that I can do,
Except explain it all to you…
What is the point of not being completely true,
It does no good it will only hurt you…
And I wish I could change the past,
Then our love would be guaranteed to last…
You would still be my angel,
And I hope that after I tell you what I need to,
That you wont say we are through…
With out you my life would be worse than the darkness into which I first fell,
Without your presence, my life would be hell.


The author's comments:
Dedicated to my angel.

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on Nov. 4 2010 at 11:34 am
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
40 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."

thank you very much :)

on Aug. 2 2010 at 7:27 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I liked this. It proves that there are, in fact, angels on the Earth. The others feel so imperfect standing next to them, but the angels are here for us!