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Dreams

September 20, 2009
By ~luckydutchess~ BRONZE, Keywest, Florida
~luckydutchess~ BRONZE, Keywest, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"One day there will be a chance that you will say that you love one person and really mean it, but every day one person is at least loving you now." - Me


I'm alive when it is dark,
So the party will start,
Through the shadows of the night,
The crow took its final flight,
And the dog will soon bark.



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PeepLoveR GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 9:45 am
PeepLoveR GOLD, Weston, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"The past may soon choose your future, and your future, may soon be your past." This a quote I thought of my self.

ha i agree with you and you shoudl read some of mine too!!!

PeepLoveR GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 9:44 am
PeepLoveR GOLD, Weston, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The past may soon choose your future, and your future, may soon be your past." This a quote I thought of my self.

i think it is good the way it is but thats my opinion ha

on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:29 pm

This poem is like

Like a dream coming true

You speak to me man


ADD106 SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 9:23 am
ADD106 SILVER, Plaquemine, Louisiana
9 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who stand for nothing, fall for anything"

I like the rhyme in this poem. I think it got the point across quite easily. However, it was short, almost too short. I feel extending this poem would be a great idea. It would make better than it already is.

PayPay said...
on Feb. 6 2010 at 6:10 pm
PayPay, Kilgore, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
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wow this is cool i like it! O by tha way i would love for you to read some of mine.

marlins1229 said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:09 pm
I loved your limerick! The only problem is that start doesn't ryhme with bark and dark. Otherwise keep up the great work!

group 7 said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 9:33 am
I thought that this poemwas very inspiring but very vague and to the point. you did a good job but i feel that you could have added more and been more detailed. otherwise good job


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