Vastly empty sea | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Limerick
  4. Vastly empty sea

Vastly empty sea

April 26, 2010
By SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
More by this author
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
40 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."

View profile

Why must we part?
Part like the vastly empty sea…
Why must you leave,
When you mean so much to me?
Gone like the flowers blown in the breeze
Or like fall leaves fallen from trees…
Every time you leave it breaks my heart,
And blows the pieces apart…
Scatters them in the breeze,
And blows them through leafless trees…
Blown into a vastly empty sea.
Leaving my heart empty,
For when you are not with me…
I feel like the vastly empty sea.

© Charlotte M., Naples, FL

The author's comments:
This poem is about missing someone and feeling so empty without them.
Dedicated to Eli.
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Anxiously Awaiting
By Laura Sifrig BRONZE
St. Joseph, Michigan
Laura Sifrig BRONZE, St. Joseph, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
the finals
By diego garcia BRONZE
Reno, Nevada
diego garcia BRONZE, Reno, Nevada
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Graduation
By Emily Briggs BRONZE
Monroe, North Carolina
Emily Briggs BRONZE, Monroe, North Carolina
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
My Best Friend
By fallinglikesnowx SILVER
Creston, Ohio
fallinglikesnowx SILVER, Creston, Ohio
9 articles 0 photos 16 comments
View profile
Poetry
If I Ran the Pet Shop
By M.G. James SILVER
San Diego, California
M.G. James SILVER, San Diego, California
9 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
When I Met You
By amandavanzant BRONZE
Yorktown, Virginia
amandavanzant BRONZE, Yorktown, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
my boyfriend is Christopher Vitt and i love him with all of my heart

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 0 comments.