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Unloving Love

January 23, 2010
By TheReader SILVER, Avon, Colorado
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TheReader SILVER, Avon, Colorado
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"Go for whatever you want, even if your friends aren't backing you up. "

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We loved today, that’s all I can say
I come tomorrow, you don’t say hey
I look in your eyes
Then I see all those lies
You’re making me cry

I walk away
Hearing your buddies say “Yeah!”
What I felt inside
Made me want to hide.

Now I walk by the park
I meet a guy named Mark
It starts again
Why would I say amen?

“Do you love me?”
Says he
I say, “ Yes.”
Did I really confess?

Again I’m alone
Outside in the cold
Do you really love me?
We’ll just have to see

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

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contrygurl BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 7:18 pm
contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
to love and to be loved is lifes greatest joy

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i totally agree with you
justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:06 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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&quot;You live but once, you might as well be amusing.&quot; -Coco Chanel<br /> &quot;Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&quot; -Richard Bach <br /> &quot;Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love.&quot; -Einstein

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my favorite part is "did i really confess?" this poem is sort of very simple but has so much to it, i really liked it. keep writing!
M.S.S. GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 12:24 pm
M.S.S. GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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&quot;WACKADOO!!!&quot; &quot;You made a funny!&quot; &quot;Red Seven! Red Seven!! Red Seh-ven-a!!!&quot; &quot;Swaaaaag!!!!&quot; &quot;Ratchet&quot; &quot;God Said No&quot; &quot;God Said Yes&quot;

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i'm kinda foggy on this but i'm interested to clear that fog...