Polychrome Moan MAG

December 29, 2011

By SILVER, San Antonio, Texas

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Bold oil rainbow
In a sky of black asphalt
Strewn with pebble stars

This article has 10 comments.

GOLD said...

on Jan. 2 2012 at 6:55 pm

This is cool. Such a different style from your other work, though!

GOLD said...

on Jan. 2 2012 at 5:09 pm

This is really gorgeous imagery. I also adore the title - it has a great ring to it. Great work.

SILVER said...

on Jan. 2 2012 at 1:31 pm

Thanks so much. You are too kind. Nice vocab. I love the word "exquisite" :)

SILVER said...

on Jan. 2 2012 at 1:29 pm

Thank you! The title just came to me... I'm not sure it makes sense. Thanks so much for the feedback alwaysfallingfurther! :)

GOLD said...

on Jan. 1 2012 at 12:21 pm

I really love your haiku! The imagery is exquisite, and I especially love the last line.

said...

on Dec. 31 2011 at 10:48 pm

I love the title! really cool imagery. great work! :)

SILVER said...

on Dec. 31 2011 at 6:42 pm

Thank you!

SILVER said...

on Dec. 31 2011 at 6:41 pm

Thanks for your feedback! Yup, I wrote this one day after seeing an oil rainbow at the supermarket parking lot. :)

PLATINUM said...

on Dec. 31 2011 at 4:06 pm

Yeah I can picture myself looking at this sensation many times in a parking lot, wondering how it got to be that way~ Solid imagery.

SILVER said...

on Dec. 31 2011 at 3:58 pm

I really like the imagery in this poem! Great job!