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Her First Goodbye

August 12, 2010
By christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
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christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
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you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

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Tears course her face. She stands still. Her head forever throbbing with the pain of her first goodbye.

© Erin H., Carrollton, TX

The author's comments:
Its always hard to let go of the things you care about most in life. She has to let go because if she holds on he will crush her world but she loves him and it hurts so bad.
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