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Beautiful is Rain

October 14, 2009
By Cristobal BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
Cristobal BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Dark clouds cover sun
You hear deep roar of thunder
You smell rain in air

Cool breeze touches flesh
Water falls from the Heavens
Feels like time is still

So beautiful rain is
Watching ripples in puddles
Rain, peaceful beauty



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on Jan. 31 2012 at 2:02 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I could feel the raindrops on my skin when reading this poem. You really appealed to the senses~

on Jan. 9 2012 at 11:44 am
This was an interesting poem. I felt like there was too much description.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 8:27 am
gonzaleztd GOLD, Clearwater, Florida
14 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can forgive, but I cannot forget, is only another way of saying, I will not forgive. Forgiveness ought to be like a cancelled note - torn in two, and burned up, so that it never can be shown against one. ~Henry Ward Beecher

This is beautiful! Makes me wanna dance in the rain! :)

on Sep. 21 2011 at 4:42 pm
selenafan1 BRONZE, Freeport, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
" Friendship is like peeing your pants, everyone can see it but only you can feel it's warmth"
"Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it is better to be absolutley ridiculous than absolutley boring"-Marilyn Monroe

I really liked this im having trouble with haikus i hav to do one for math cuz i just do freeverse HELP

EricForman said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:26 pm
EricForman, Texas
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The imagery is truly amazing. Its like it is actually real.

minecrafter said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:22 pm
minecrafter, Farmers Branch, Texas
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Beautiful, truely beautiful, very discriptive.

on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:40 am
nikkigonefishin GOLD, Los Angeles, California
17 articles 1 photo 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" A smile is worth a thousand words"
" The purpose of the writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself."- Albert Camus

I LOVE the rain!

on Apr. 20 2011 at 8:29 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Nice work!! :] that was very very pretty! beautiful imagery

on Sep. 12 2010 at 5:30 pm
BlindSamurai GOLD, Bridgewater, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
A man who stands for nothing will fall for anything.
-Malcolm X

Beautifully composed, really good work.

Check out my work at BlindSamurai please! All comments appreciated


on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:10 pm
Annika-Katryn SILVER, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Thou art my life, my love, my heart,
The very eyes of me:
And hast command of every part
To live and die for thee."
-Robert Herrick

the imagery was beautiful, and came across so well. i could see it, feel it, taste it. thank you :)

marykate said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 12:08 pm
Great job! The middle haiku was my fav but all of it was very good.

on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:51 am
TheOcherousRodentia PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is infinitely growing;
It's capacity of love and fear is impossible
To calculate by the means of math, or
The properties of science, and to conatain
Its ferious unpredictability is only a virtue
That humans despire

One word. Lovely! Great Job! Keep up the good work.

on Mar. 20 2010 at 4:49 am
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

Nice, elegant control to get your message through in a strict style without becoming awkward

on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:13 pm
Cristobal i really like your poem more than any other i have read i also write poems too. good work by the way.