Mirrored Nights

September 8, 2009
By anonymousjulie BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
anonymousjulie BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Big skies, starry nights
Looking up with hopeful eyes
Close yet far away

Drifting from above
Dreams with possibilities
Screaming silent words

Bright hues shining through
Starry skies filling your eyes
With reality


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on Sep. 26 2010 at 9:14 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

wow i lyv this. itz really powerful. took me a minute 2 understand but this is amazingg(: keep it upp

on Aug. 12 2010 at 5:05 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

i love the flow.  but i dont get it. 

on Aug. 12 2010 at 8:38 am
WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND, Massapequa, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't damsel well. Distress, I can do. Damseling? Not so much."
— James Patterson
"This is the very first page, not where the storyline ends, my thoughts will echo your name until I see you again..." ~Taylor Swift "Enchanted"

I thought that this poem was beautiful and that you have a great understanding of language use! Keep writing! :)

on Apr. 2 2010 at 6:16 pm
AmberRose SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Even Monkeys fall out of trees."

I love it!!! Please comment my work and tell me what you think!!!

on Dec. 16 2009 at 8:11 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

one word: awesome!

on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:26 pm
anonymousjulie BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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thanks, and I did have a completely different beginning but I counted all my syllables wrong so I had to rewrite it. [:

and the middle section bothers me, if I could have the second line as the top line and the top line as the second I'd like it a lot better.

on Sep. 28 2009 at 12:02 pm
michaela BRONZE, Green Cove Springs, Florida
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Also, you spelled everything correctly and there are no typos, which can be--sadly--rare with online publishing, so that just added to the joy of reading your work. Keep writing! ;)

on Sep. 28 2009 at 12:01 pm
michaela BRONZE, Green Cove Springs, Florida
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I love haikus, especially yours!

The mood you create is one of my favourites. (: I can't really describe it, and that's good, because your poetry described it! The last one is my favourite...it just has a good ring to it. I'll say one negative thing to be constructive--haha--I think you're creative enough to think of less popular adjectives then you used in the first one, but of course then it wouldn't be a haiku...

Altogether, I love your work. Please keep writing! (:

♥♥ Michaela




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