Child of the Snow (Snow Angel) MAG

June 29, 2009
By Elizabeth Ridolfi SILVER, Auburn, California
Elizabeth Ridolfi SILVER, Auburn, California
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You spin in diamond
Pale as the snow you came from
Spring sends you away



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on Jun. 22 2012 at 9:39 am
HeatherOlivia GOLD, Solothurn, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"All things truly wicked start from innocence." - Ernest Hemingway

haikus always get to me. I always find myself puzzling over hidden meanings and reading inbetween the lines. You told so much with so few words, I love it!

NathanB GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 5:03 pm
NathanB GOLD, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Great Imagery! Please look at some of my stuff.

on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:17 pm
G.Spangler BRONZE, Midland, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"A man is but what he thinks he is. What he thinks, he becomes." -Ghandi
"Do or Do Not, there is no Try." -Yoda

This was really good, the picture just adds to the imagery. Great work! :)

bullseye575 said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 11:42 am
that was a good little sory the hicus are the best

Merrdestm said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 11:29 am
I like this one because of the writers creativity.

on Feb. 24 2011 at 11:24 am
Alfred_Ribbons BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
3 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?

I love this Haiku :) But the word Diamond kind of through me off, because I always through it could be three syllables :p but I still liked it.

lollypops GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 9:00 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
16 articles 5 photos 219 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live

amazing i didnt lok at the title till  the end and at the end i was like wow she is talking about a snow angel then it was like wow i was right

on May. 6 2010 at 1:19 pm

This iz cool, i like it! :-D



Girl-Writer said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 11:01 pm

I thought these comments were supposed to be positive and constructive ;) Nice work Elizabeth. A very nice haiku - could I make a few pointers?? I'm going to anyway...

Try and create the meaning of the poem so that it skimms below the surface of the writing.

But anyway I think it's great!


Niccole SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2009 at 4:19 pm
Niccole SILVER, Melbourne, Florida
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I like it a lot

on Sep. 7 2009 at 7:09 am
of course its simple... its a haiku poem.

duh.

on Aug. 19 2009 at 7:53 pm
sweet simple and beautiful

on Aug. 14 2009 at 1:31 am
ramnapotter PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
26 articles 1 photo 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Write to be understood, speak to be heard, read to grow...”

Very nice. Class all the way. Read my work? Please don't hesitate to comment. Thanks.

babe892 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2009 at 7:22 am
babe892 GOLD, Suffern, New York
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The title of this reminded me of the Elliott Smith song "Snow Angel", so in reading it, I was almost expecting something similar just because the title sort of called that to mind. And let me tell you, I wasn't disappointed. Short, simple, to the point, but very poignant.

on Jul. 26 2009 at 9:20 pm
icguf615 BRONZE, Mission Viejo, California
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great haiku

on Jul. 26 2009 at 1:13 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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Simple so simple! but soooo soooo beautiful...

on Jul. 21 2009 at 5:24 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

I really love how you can say what you want to in little words. it is perfect!

on Jul. 17 2009 at 12:00 am
yourworstnightmare BRONZE, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The best prize that life offers is the chance to work hard at work worth doing. (Teddy Roosevelt)

that was sweet and simple. nice job!


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