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By Rachel S., Healsburg, CA

     Ink trails, rage, love,
Tangoing violently
Across blistered wall




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Mike_Tython said...
on May. 10 at 10:12 am
Mike_Tython, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I jutht want to conquer people and their soulth.

Ath a boxer, I don't underthtand graffiti, but I believe that thith captureth graffiti in the way that I view it from movieth and Televithion.

i love this so much!

what ? it is so good

on Mar. 13 2017 at 10:36 pm
eshaansoman SILVER, Hillsborough, New Jersey
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really captures graffiti in a unique perspective! Thanks for sharing!

on Apr. 26 2016 at 10:48 am
Duchess101 BRONZE, Tipton, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Five seconds of awkward can save you a lifetime of regret." ~Sadie Robertson

I love it short and sweet.:)

on May. 27 2015 at 3:13 am
Iamwhoiam17 GOLD, Lake City Fl, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just be yourself,if you are happy that's all that matter's.

That is great!! Please check out my poem and like it please!: TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/709809/MeWho-i-want-to-be/

on Apr. 23 2013 at 3:10 pm
Michelle Rowicki GOLD, Passaic, New Jersey
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I live in a city with graffiti everywhere, so this poem gives me a new perspective. If I were you I would change the last word to walls; it emphasizes the commanality.

on Apr. 23 2013 at 11:57 am
steelsoprano DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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I love this poem :) but ya need another syllable in the first line :D

on Feb. 24 2013 at 6:07 am
cornflower_glass SILVER, Seongbuk-gu, Other
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simple but directly moving. ^_^b

tyty25 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:39 pm
tyty25 BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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the only problem i see in this poem is that the first line has only 4 syllables. but otehrwise it is a great poem and Ii like the originality.

on Jan. 6 2012 at 9:47 am
joshhuey2013 BRONZE, Weston, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"i might not change the world but i will spark the brain that will change the world" Tupac Shakur

hey larzthesquirrel its still a cool poem wether its 4 our not so shove it

on Oct. 25 2011 at 7:26 pm
LarztheSquirrel BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If life gives you lemons, make lemonade."

there are only four syllables in the first line. you would need another syllable for it to be a haiku

good poem otherwise


on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:29 am
its a very strong and powerful and the picture helps alot

on Aug. 20 2011 at 5:44 pm
CharlieSmoke GOLD, Lowell, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
“Nature is a haunted house--but Art--is a house that tries to be haunted.”
- Emily Dickinson

This is good! Lots of power for a haiku.

on Jun. 12 2011 at 3:36 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.
W.W.J.D.

isn't a haiku 5,7,5?

on Apr. 11 2011 at 11:11 am
Imonwashere PLATINUM, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"When the least they could do to you was everything, then the most they could do to you suddenly held no terror." -Terry Pratchett, Small Gods

The words give off the feeling of hate and yet it moves me...

I like it =].


on Apr. 6 2011 at 11:58 am
very visual.

on Mar. 4 2011 at 1:12 pm
ilovenicole BRONZE, Fort Mill, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments
beautiful.

croww said...
on Feb. 26 2011 at 2:08 pm
the words choices are great!! love it!

on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:46 am
LEBRONISTHEKING561, State Center, Iowa
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interesting.


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