Me/Who i want to be

September 1, 2014
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As a little girl,i sat there wondering what"s inside of me. who do i want to be? what do i want to see? always wondering who i will grow up to be. i will let go of the past and be free. i will just be me!





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SallyW.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 17, 2016 at 11:43 am
Short, simple, and true. Nice job!
 
Whichwayup said...
Sept. 18, 2015 at 6:54 pm
This is good, you can go far if you keep writing. But poetry isn't just about making good rhymes. That's for songs. Poetry and songs are much different.
 
MissEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2014 at 11:05 am
So true! Every one should jus want to be themselves! There is a reason why, you're here and why you're you, yourself I love it. It has a lt od depth and power. Thank you for sharing this! You have such a talent! Thank you again!. 
 
Iamwhoiam16 replied...
Oct. 1, 2014 at 10:44 pm
Thank you so much! It means a lot to me,that someone actually loves my work! :)
 
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