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Mountains of Frost

May 22, 2018
By Punic BRONZE, New York, New York
Punic BRONZE, New York, New York
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Stronger than a wall
A barrier of frost and stone
Only heroes can cross

Mortal men armed with
Nothing these barriers
Cannot provide

They lived and
They fought giants
And earned themselves a name

No mortar is necessary
To keep these beasts together
Yet not one is unsurmountable

Even the tallest of them all
Was defeated amist frost
By the heroes of legend and fire

In the largest fortress in western Europe
The heroes attacked it to conquer
Their foes on the other side

The giants tried to stop them
They nearly crushed them
But they didn’t stop them

The frozen giants didn’t move
But they will not surrender
And they will not die
But they can be defeated


The author's comments:

I was inspired to write this piece about the mountains because of their historic significance. They have been barriers that have stopped people cold, shocked them and almost shattered several nations with the surprise that comes with crossing them. Although people have crossed mountains, Hannibal the Alps, the Cimmerians and the Scythians the Caucasus mountains, they were difficult to cross and presented what appeared to some as insurmountable barriers. For example, by some accounts, Hannibal lost many men(some say most of his men) in his crossing of the Alps. In my riddle poem, I referred to the mountains as giants, as inspired by the giants throwing the rocks at each other in the Misty mountains in the Hobbit by J. R. R. Tolkien. I also called the Alps the greatest fortress in western Europe because they are the hardest barrier to cross in western Europe and because to many people throughout history, they were a fortress, as Hannibal could have stated.
I also hope that the readers will remember a time where mountains were not vacation places for skiing but when they were barriers, with the monstrous defenders of snow, ice, supplies and rocks.


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