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April 23, 2018
By lizziekaboski105 BRONZE, Barrington, Illinois
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we lay peacefully, together
his hands were warm
interlaced fingers
and i could feel his energy
his hands were warm
his lips soft on my neck
and i could feel his energy
electricity pulsating through my frozen bones
his lips soft on my neck
whispering like the wind on a breezy autumn evening
electricity pulsating through my frozen bones
bringing our souls closer together
whispering like the wind on a breezy autumn evening
his words genuine and real
bringing our souls closer together
and falling into love
his words genuine and real
interlaced fingers
and falling into love
we lay peacefully, together

© Amanda T.,Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by a relationship that I had. It paints a picture of what it felt like for me to fall in love.

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