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Flocked, judgment

March 11, 2018
By Cecil BRONZE, Fort Wayne, Indiana
Cecil BRONZE, Fort Wayne, Indiana
3 articles 7 photos 26 comments

I was talking

to the crows

They told me
about your

glue still

skin, rags
on spirit

and how
I could never.

I love you.

The author's comments:

The fallacies of human judgment distort our vision when we search for love. Arbitrary standards of beauty, rigid definitions of sexuality, prejudice, and age differences assure us that our soulmates cannot be loved. "Flocked, judgment" explores love outside of these boundaries.

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HammadWaseem said...
on Apr. 3 2018 at 3:22 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
0 articles 5 photos 283 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!

amazing and nice work @Courtney16 will you check and comment on my teen ink pic Side view of Sketching Guy and video The Unbeatable Breakdancer? :)

Marie said...
on Mar. 19 2018 at 9:50 pm
I read a lot of poetry, this doesn’t make me an expert, but I know what I like. This is a beautiful poem, well written, and it stays with you.
Best of luck Courtney