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vulnerability + love

December 13, 2017
By mmmary17 BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
mmmary17 BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Falling in love was a first the most uncertain drizzle,

a hesitancy marked by soft droplets
and a fear of rejection.

Then falling in love was a new rain, a spring rain
a rain plopping questions into my lap.
They were answered honestly, defenselessly (though with fear in my chest).

Falling in love then surprised me because it drenched me
like a rainstorm that appeared over my head out of nowhere
and left me soaking wet and whirling but alive.

After that falling in love involved buckets (quite a few in fact)
as I collected all that rain and saved it
for the growing garden in my heart.

Falling in love didn’t really have a final stage;
one day I was falling and then one day I landed
in a giant bucket of love-water.  It’s cozier than it sounds.


The author's comments:

This poem was written in a haphazard frenzy to put into words what it feels like to fall in love so fully. 


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