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I Could Have Saved You

December 4, 2017
By OutlandishKid SILVER, Harbor City, California
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I could have saved you

And you know I make you smile

I will give you that remedy that you have been longing for awhile

But, look what we have here

Now we are in this mess,

Dealing with these emotions and dealing with all this stress

You know I wouldn’t hurt you, so why do you choose the rest?

© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY

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WriteFreak BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2017 at 3:30 am
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Great piece of work! I'm not really into longer poetry, so this was good!