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When Love Became Loved

November 1, 2017
By EGR2100 PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
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EGR2100 PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
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Never doubt your abilities because that is when you stop trying

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I love him like
the bees love flowers,
like dogs playing fetch,
like a breezy summer day,
like the calm waters ahead.

like A perfect hair day,
an Unusual set of words,
a Sunset over water,
Time going by,
Ice melting,
Nothing happening.

I loved him like,
the moon loved the sun,
the perfect pair of jeans,
a nice clean car,
the destruction after a storm,
a flame burning out,
the trail of smoke behind me.

© Michelle W., Ada, MI

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