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A body of nothing

February 22, 2017
By Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
48 articles 3 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"so do it. Decide. Is this the person you want to be? Is this the life you want to live? Is this the best you can be?"
"I survived the fire because the fire within me burns brighter than the one around me"


I am 

empty

hollow

yet filled

to the brim

with thoughts

memories

I feel

loved

hated

yet full

of pure

nothingness

I try

try to smile

try to find

the point of life

but Answers doesn't

seem like it wants

to reply

demons

fill my head

hatred

in my heart

yet I feel

love

in my soul

and life

in my mind

empty

the feeling of feeling

                       absolutely nothing.



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DuckLover GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2017 at 10:44 am
DuckLover GOLD, Winchester, Kentucky
11 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be happy, not because everything you see is good, but because you can see the good in everything.

I found this piece very enjoyable, and deep. Good job!

on Mar. 10 2017 at 11:49 am
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
48 articles 3 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"so do it. Decide. Is this the person you want to be? Is this the life you want to live? Is this the best you can be?"
"I survived the fire because the fire within me burns brighter than the one around me"

thank you!!

Patrick82432 said...
on Mar. 9 2017 at 4:36 pm
Patrick82432, Cheektowaga, New York
0 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where voice had failed
my pen prevailed
and like the winds, became a gale"

~Me

This piece is amazing, it truly expresses the emotions, or lack thereof, in words; something that isn't too easy. I love it. Keep writing!