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Hows Love
February 3, 2017
Love is blind, as some shall say
You cannot see any of the way
You go through obstacles and jumps
as you hit patches and bumps
Love is a nightmare, according to them
that darkness falls and light dims.
You fall too hard and go too far
as you try your best to win the war
Love hurts as lovers may say
because they fell farther everyday
you get ripped and you get burned
yet everyday, the lovers earned
When you're in love, they say you fly
and every hour and day will go by
faster in the blink of an eye
and the higher you go, the more you try.
© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA
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valkyrie1212 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2017 at 6:50 pm
This poem's quite nice, and you were able to get the basic idea across, which is great! The only thing I could find was that in the second stanza, the rhythm was off - it didn't flow right. So maybe you could rewrite/reword it, and then read it aloud to see if the rhythm is better. Other than that, this poem's well written and quite enjoyable to read :)
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