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October 10, 2016
By christian,otter. BRONZE, Bay City, Michigan
christian,otter. BRONZE, Bay City, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"if your day sucks it sucks"


1 dollar a week is not so bad,
Does not bother me a tad,
Her name is Layla,
Everybody loves Layla,
She sure is quicker,
Or you could say she's a ripper,
Turn key,
Yep definitely for me,
Oh Layla you're definitely for me,
Everything down to your shiney little key


    I Dream
I dream to be successful,
I dream to live my life very un stressful,
I dream to have fast cars,
I dream to have a lifted diesel with a 10 inch axle dump,
I dream to have a big garage to cover them,
I dream to keep active and stay in shape,
I dream to hunt trophy buck and mallard ducks,
I dream to die with the people that i ride with,
I dream to find the love of my life,
I dream to make something of myself, i dream to make my life rememberable.

   

    Paragraph reflection
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`throughout my unit of writing i've noticed my writing poetry has become more fun and enjoyable. I've noticed i became more patient and understanding the purpose of writing. I think over all i have become a petter poetry writer. Favorite piece is the poem about my photo because I can write about it for days on end. I made my revisions the way i did to help make them flow smoother and more understanding. For My Photo i pretty much left it the same I just cleaned it up i guess but my litany poem I had to change some of the lines.


    
 


The author's comments:

it took a long time


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