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WAR IS PAIN

May 16, 2016
By drenba41 BRONZE, Millville, New Jersey
drenba41 BRONZE, Millville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."


In away you will get hurt or damaged,

war is a trap of pain,

somsome not taking your life is something you cant manager,

its a trap that could hurt you mentally,

its guaranteed pain.

That will end eventually,

pain is never over it only more to gain

you may lose your mind and go crazy

sensitive to sound because you still feel trapped in a war zone

No way to talk to your family because there's no phone

It feel like your in a box and cant leave.



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Hanban12 ELITE said...
on May. 24 2016 at 9:29 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

I would definitely recommend reviewing your grammar, punctuation, and spelling before you submit. Keep writing though, practice makes perfect! :)