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Shades of Red

October 23, 2015
By jnmichael BRONZE, Lake Hiawatha, New Jersey
jnmichael BRONZE, Lake Hiawatha, New Jersey
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Scarlett flickers in the flames and consumes
Brick, which builds the house that hosts the family who is rescued by
Crimson, sirens wailing and spewing unceremonious tendrils of water, and saving
Mahogany, who cries out in relief, for her dining set is saved, and supports
Merlot, who tuts as she is swallowed cleanly from a glass by the mother, and
Rose, staining the woman’s lips, collects on the rim of the glass, and
Cherry-blossom, who clings to her cheeks, exemplifies her distraught over
Ruby, who was certainly eaten wholly, golden band and all, by
Scarlett.


The author's comments:

In school, I take a creative writing course where we spent a week learning about poetry. One day, we were assigned to come up with a piece utilizing one of three poetic devices we learned about (apostrophe, imagery, or personification). After spending a lot of time trying to think of something unique to personify, I decided to give color a try, or more specifically, shades of red. 


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DMulroony said...
on Jan. 7 2016 at 10:50 am
Jessica, I really love this poem. You did a great job of exploring these shades of red. So creative and original. Keep writing! Dr. Mulroony