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The Cutting Edge

September 27, 2015
By DestinyTrombley BRONZE, Middleburgh, New York
DestinyTrombley BRONZE, Middleburgh, New York
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Turning through tough topics,
Time stands still.
Shiny glimmers of sharp secrets,
Like sickness they creep.

Hallucinations halt hasty comfort,
As sadness slits and slashes
Spright spirits.

Boiling blood burns,
Fumbling fits and feelings.
Crazily craving contentment.
As voices venture, destroying valuable virtues.

Mental mania meets manic manners.
Numb neurons need assistance.
Battling brain and steady shaving sorrow.
Crazed thoughts carefully carve chasms.


The author's comments:

This is a poem using the metaphor of razor blades to descride insanity. It also uses a lot of alliteration.


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