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To That Girl With The Big Smile but, Bloodshot Red Eyes

May 1, 2015
By Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
'' For every dark night there is an even brighter day"

-Tupac Shukar

Baby girl your not alone there are people out there that care for you deeply
If you have to cry plese tell me and i will cry with you
if you want to be alone tell me and i will sit behind you so you dont see me
you feel worhtless?
Baby girl let me show you a great man named God who knows how much your worth i mean he left a sixty-six book letter just for you.
If you feel like your all alone close your eyse and imagine me right next to you.
If someone thinks your ugly look in the mirror and tell yourself you know your beautifull, over and over again.
Baby girl if you think a knife is the way to go think again cause your body is a temple that shouldn't be damaged.
If you think i'm lyin ask yourself if i would really spend my time lyin bout this when i could just talk bad to you.
Baby Girl your beautifull and this will all blow over take it from someone who knows.
If you think nobody cares think about the fact that this letter was written just for you.


Love, The girl with a big smile and bloodshot red eyes

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This article has 4 comments.

on Jun. 28 2015 at 6:39 pm
Dreamer29 SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
ew, people

I love the idea of this piece and the message behind it and how you brought religion into it and how God is always there for us in general. I think that the best thing would be to make sure you use the correct version of 'you're' and that you use commas at the appropriate places. I am not a huge fan of the 'baby girl' thing but that is just a personal thing. i thing that you should continue to pour your heart out and be who you are.

on Jun. 14 2015 at 9:25 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Aww :') I seriously ♥ this poem...Well done!

on Jun. 12 2015 at 5:39 pm
Consalvator BRONZE, South Jordan, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Once you make a decision, the universe conspires to make it happen." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

You have such passion behind this work. Fantastic message, and great connection. My only critic is spelling. There was a few spelling/grammatical errors that took away from the piece (and by no means am I a grammer nazi) that if corrected would make this piece that much better. Continue pouring your heart into your work, it's very moving! :)

on Jun. 11 2015 at 1:12 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

I don't know how XD But you transmitted my entire respects lol I usually do stuff like this when it's to girls with issues on my FB and stuff lol a poet is a poet is a poet lol keep on writing XD and keep grabbin my vibes lol I LOVE IT