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She Lost

April 25, 2015
By Anonymous

The hope in her heart
The dreams in her eyes
The struggle she was all set for
The battle ready to fight
With utmost passion and courage
She stepped down in the battle field
And even the stars in the sky
Couldn't compete with her shine
This was the moment she longed for
This was the chance she ever wanted
The clock stopped tickling putting a hault to the time
But she dropped down to her knees
Her body racking with silent sobs
Alas the scenery ahead vanishing in a flight.


The author's comments:

Often we get obsessed with something so much that if we fail to achieve or it, our whole world shatters. We are ready to give our everything for it but the only thing we really let go is our hope.
These lines are describing a somewhat similar case where dreams are broken within a second. Thus the harsh reality of life is what I tried to write.


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on Apr. 30 2015 at 10:19 am
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Mehreen said...
on Apr. 30 2015 at 9:59 am
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