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Hotel

March 27, 2015
By xdrixnnx BRONZE, Millville, New Jersey
xdrixnnx BRONZE, Millville, New Jersey
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You are a hotel, 

that I find comfort in, 

warm and cozy.

You are all I need, 

no sleep, no breakfast.

You are the entertainment

of the television.

You are the beauty 

of the top floor view.

Your heart is the lobby, 

and the highschool teen parties

are in your brain.

You are a hotel, 

that I find comfort in.

Somewhere,

where I want to stay.


The author's comments:

I'm in a creative writing class at my school, and the assignment we were to do was pick a metaphor from Butch Hancock's song, "If You Were A Bluebird," and I picked "I am a hotel." However, I changed "I" to "you," which made it a poem about love or affection and safety in another person, rather then myself.


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