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All I Need Is a Friend MAG

January 28, 2009
By Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
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Books fill up my room.
Not baseball cards,
or pictures of girls,
or basketballs.
Maybe a blown up picture of …
… Pam Anderson might help.

Black-framed glasses
and a white,
pale,
lanky
body.
I should start working out.

At least I can read.
I read four books a day last summer.
The librarian,
80-year-old Mrs. Woodsworth,
she knows my middle name.
If only I had a real friend.
I am sick of seeing her old,
bony,
pale body.
Although it resembles mine.

The kids at school laugh.
Is it the way I dress?
Lacoste,
Ralph Lauren,
La Tigre.
I’ve tried every designer out there.
Staying in the house really saves me money.
My stupid rich parents give me $50 a week for lunch.
$50 times 36 weeks …
what is that?
$1,000,
$2,000,
$10,000?
I should probably know.
Straight A’s 12 years in a row
and counting.

With all of this,
or none of this –
it depends how you look at it –
all I need is a friend.



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on Oct. 26 2011 at 8:33 am
celebeauty1 SILVER, Newark, New Jersey
9 articles 4 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"fight till you get to the TOP!" written by me

" i am not who you think I am. my people are not who you think they are. our culture and traditions are unknow to you.
so put your brews and blunts on pause. rock with me for a few" Sister Souljah

your poem came out plain amazing! i love it!

u know what? i will be ur friend!


on Oct. 26 2011 at 7:40 am
exoskeletaI BRONZE, New City, New York
3 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Me gusta."

me gusta. I really like how you were able to convey the character the same way as the librarian, but at the same time, make the character dislike her because of their similarities.

on Oct. 26 2011 at 7:22 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

thats amazing!

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on Oct. 25 2011 at 12:24 am
AMJaeh DIAMOND, Gallatin, Tennessee
51 articles 80 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
you don't have to understand the language to know its Poetik written Muzyk~PoetikMuzyk
Not Everything is ours to keep, no matter how hard we had to fight for it~PoetikMuzyk
‎"The face of my enemy only frightens me when I see how much it resembles mine"
- Stanislaw J. Lec

a few neurons can make us all a morons dont you think?

Wow lost for words but you sure found them

on Oct. 24 2011 at 8:10 pm
monthofseptember246 SILVER, New York, New York
7 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
for love is the strongest poison, the prettiest view, the funniest laugh and the worst nightmare.

This is SO good! it makes you realize that your not the only one out there who feels alone

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 10:39 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Yeah, I relate. I  have found, though, if you get out there and join a club or two, then finding friends is incredibly easy. Good luck, I know you'll find someone... maybe you could check my work sometime?

matthewzipf said...
on Oct. 19 2011 at 8:44 pm
matthewzipf, Silver Spring, Maryland
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I think a lot of people can really relate to this poem.

on Oct. 19 2011 at 8:25 pm
Ally1832 SILVER, Bark River, Michigan
5 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wipe away the tears and walk away

This really makes you think of what kinds of people just need someone...Very inspiring.

on Oct. 19 2011 at 7:47 pm
stillheartless PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
40 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you. I love you. I send this message through my fingers and into his, up his arm and into his heart. Hear me. I love you. And I'm sorry to leave you." -Jenny Downham

aww. I love this! It hits pretty deep too. I'll be your friend. I mean If you want

 


on Oct. 19 2011 at 11:33 am
poetrylyrics BRONZE, Helena, Arkansas
1 article 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
1)I will be grateful in all circumstances.
2)The measure of a life, after all, is not its duration, but its donation

Great job. I'm new to Teen Ink. Check out my first poem. : ) 

untamable said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 2:34 pm
i like how this poem was easy to relate to and somewhat reminded me of my past occurences

KenKen GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 11:51 pm
KenKen GOLD, Austin, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nelson Mendela-"Free your mind and the rest will follow"

I liked how the character was portrayed in the story/poem.Keep up the good work!

on Oct. 11 2011 at 12:38 am
Greenpaw BRONZE, Billerica, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 11 comments
I really enjoy the emotion of this poem, XD. If anyone has time can they provide feedback on my poem?

on Oct. 6 2011 at 7:49 pm
Mason101 SILVER, Peoria, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
All is fair in love and war

That is beautiful and so true

on Oct. 6 2011 at 4:45 pm
AristotlesApprentice, Moultrie, Georgia
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i like this one very much. your portraying a rich kid who hates his life (not trying to be mean or degrading to anyone at all) yet all people want to be is, is rich. i see the underlying message at how, yeah you can buy whatever item/non essential thing you want...but you cant buy friendships (true friendships) and you cant buy love. another message is saying at how even though a great thing like money can take you a long ways, it sure can bring you down a long ways as well.

on Oct. 4 2011 at 8:13 pm
ZookTheGnome SILVER, Zanesville, Indiana
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself one.
~ James A. Froude

Very sweet poem! Don't fret, my man. There is somebody out there for everyone, even if that doesn't feel true now. 

on Oct. 4 2011 at 7:08 pm
TheGirlWhoDancesWithSnowflakes SILVER, Sunnyvale, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together."

Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another,
"What! You too? I thought I was the only one."
- C. S. Lewis

Whoops. My comment posted twice! S- Sorry! -_-'

on Oct. 4 2011 at 7:06 pm
TheGirlWhoDancesWithSnowflakes SILVER, Sunnyvale, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together."

Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another,
"What! You too? I thought I was the only one."
- C. S. Lewis

*cue music*

You got a friend in me!

You got a friend... IN ME! xD

 

Now that I'm done with the silly-ness, on to the poem and the picture.

 

WOW. :( That poem hit me deep. My little cousin's a little geek-ish, like... coughMEcough... so I kinda understand what it's like to be friendless. D:

 

Now the picture.

 

OMG! THAT'S NARUTO! AND THE GIRL IS SUPPOSED TO BE HINATA BUT SOMEONE TAMPERED WITH IT!

 

xD Major anime fangirl moment. Honestly though, the picture is cute. I love little Naru~ chan and Hina~ hime! :D That's right; I just spoke Japanese honorifics!

 

MIND BLOWING!!

 

Overall, I give your poem... *deep thought*

 

A... 5/5!!!!


on Oct. 4 2011 at 5:26 pm
PiesAreYummy BRONZE, San Pedro Sula, Other
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey Patrick, can you hear me? No SpongeBob, it's too dark in here."

I agree :D

HunterF5695 said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 4:52 pm
Hi there im Forrest Gump!