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All I Need Is a Friend MAG

January 28, 2009
By Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
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Books fill up my room.
Not baseball cards,
or pictures of girls,
or basketballs.
Maybe a blown up picture of …
… Pam Anderson might help.

Black-framed glasses
and a white,
pale,
lanky
body.
I should start working out.

At least I can read.
I read four books a day last summer.
The librarian,
80-year-old Mrs. Woodsworth,
she knows my middle name.
If only I had a real friend.
I am sick of seeing her old,
bony,
pale body.
Although it resembles mine.

The kids at school laugh.
Is it the way I dress?
Lacoste,
Ralph Lauren,
La Tigre.
I’ve tried every designer out there.
Staying in the house really saves me money.
My stupid rich parents give me $50 a week for lunch.
$50 times 36 weeks …
what is that?
$1,000,
$2,000,
$10,000?
I should probably know.
Straight A’s 12 years in a row
and counting.

With all of this,
or none of this –
it depends how you look at it –
all I need is a friend.



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on Dec. 29 2010 at 6:29 pm
lazerynnichelle BRONZE, Ny, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Live laugh Love!

This is good i am an avid reader as well  much like you who gets the feeling that there is more to life than books.

on Dec. 29 2010 at 4:08 pm
TheAsianHeather SILVER, Wuhan, Other
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is no longer I that live,but Christ living in me.-The Apostle Paul

What kind of poem is that?!I don't like it,but I have to agree that I feel the same way as you sometimes.Actually,a lot of times.

Schubster said...
on Dec. 28 2010 at 4:17 pm

Wow a lot of comments!

I can swee why though. You successfully expressed your own feelings in a great piece of work (and not just the trite feelings that are usually written).

And you successfully took people into your poem and made them see who you are.

*starts to whistle "You Got a Friend in Me*

 


roop... said...
on Dec. 25 2010 at 9:47 am

the poem is really beutiful!

the poem surely is wht u feel but rihgt  now they also reflect wht m  feeling...

loved your poem...keep writing

m ur frnd!! :)


Leann14 GOLD said...
on Dec. 23 2010 at 10:30 pm
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
16 articles 4 photos 110 comments
its raw=) i like it... if this is really about u, know that u have friends... maybe not right there physically beside u but i can see by all these comments u have plenty! including me!

on Dec. 22 2010 at 8:48 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
7 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

I will be your friend. all joking aside. you say the word and youve got a friend for life:)

on Dec. 22 2010 at 6:27 pm
Kyle Kaminicki BRONZE, Monticello, Arkansas
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I have to say this poem made me depressed but it was amazing!!! Your a true poet. Don't worry you will find a friend.

on Dec. 22 2010 at 3:19 pm
XxDeadlyKissxX GOLD, San Diego, California
12 articles 7 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't put a period where God put a comma.

I'll be you friend!! Amazing poem!! 

P.S. I feel the same way... (:


on Dec. 22 2010 at 12:09 pm
Nice work! The poem was awesome, and I can't wait to see some more of your work. PS: I know you must be bogged down by how many new friends you have, but.....I'll be your friend too! Take care. :)

on Dec. 22 2010 at 9:05 am
JessicaJ BRONZE, Tallmadge, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
My favorite quote is when Christopher Robin said to Pooh "Promise my you'll always remember, you are braver than you believe, stronger than you feel, and smarter than you think."

I'll be your friend. :) Great poem.

yomamma said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 8:25 am
yomamma, Connetquot, New York
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;JEALOUSY,THAT DRAGON WHICH SLAYS LOVE,WHILE PRETENDING TO KEEP IT ALIVE.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Invisibility is not a super power,but a disease of those who go unnoticed.&quot;

loooove this poem!! it makes sense.

on Dec. 22 2010 at 7:57 am
Abbygail.Blahbagail SILVER, Kingston, Other
5 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d grape that&quot; - Abbygail Satura<br /> &quot; Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss , you will land amongst the stars.&quot; - Les Brown

Ryan, you will always have friends.

maybe not physical friends. if that makes sense?

anyways, great job. you are an amazing writer. keep up the good work!


ashleyr said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 12:57 am
ashleyr, Darien, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time waits for no one.

this is sooo sooo....brilliant.:)

on Dec. 21 2010 at 3:37 pm
OliverTwist BRONZE, Alexandria, Louisiana
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Nice work, man.

This sounds autobiographical, and if it is, just know that you won't always be friendless. I can attest to that.

Keep up the good work!


on Dec. 20 2010 at 7:58 pm
KiraBira11 BRONZE, Maplewood, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Always Expect the Unexpected.&quot;

This is so good. Like i would love to see more work from the author.

on Dec. 17 2010 at 8:43 pm
JaimeNichole SILVER, Trenton, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a lie. Reality is an illusion. And sanity is insanity in disguise.

Loved this. It's easy to relate to. It's raw and real. Please keep this up.

on Dec. 16 2010 at 12:16 pm
elizabitch BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friends are like condoms.<br /> They&#039;re there for when things get hard.

cool,cool.

Abby96 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 5:13 pm
Abby96 BRONZE, Leesburg, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 26 comments
Trust me we've all been there. I also love your poem, almost anyone can find something to connect with in it.

on Dec. 11 2010 at 4:43 pm
P@inLe55 PLATINUM, Poteet, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be your self and have fun, for you only live once

I know how it feels to be alone so understand it, but with your poems being so great you will get tons of friends. I'd be your friend!

on Dec. 11 2010 at 4:40 pm
P@inLe55 PLATINUM, Poteet, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be your self and have fun, for you only live once

Honestly if you aren't being constructive then dont say anything...This poem is great so if you dont like it keep it to your self!