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A Weight Off My Shoulders

March 12, 2015
By Yoela PLATINUM, Seattle, Washington
Yoela PLATINUM, Seattle, Washington
27 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My powers stretch over the horizon and work even when my eyes are closed"


I yield

         my life

                    I yield

to the mercy of the wind



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Yoela PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 16 2015 at 3:32 pm
Yoela PLATINUM, Seattle, Washington
27 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My powers stretch over the horizon and work even when my eyes are closed"

Thanks!! I just recommended this to you in response to a comment on a different poem of mine :P I wanted to know what you think, and now I do, so thanks a bunch!

on Mar. 16 2015 at 2:32 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Very simple and profound. I like the way you spaced your lines here. It really helps the flow.


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