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Response Poem to Forest Haammer

March 3, 2015
By Jesus7 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
Jesus7 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Mathews 5:16 "Let your light so shine bright, that men would look back on our good works, and praise our father which is in heaven." The Holy Bible KJV


Teach it
Preach it
My Brother
Speak it
To the us that don’t know one from another
Tell how it all began
To the middle and let us be the end
Let them know how the world goes
And that it is not like them get rich TV shows
line up like soldier in rows
less of us more of I
Poet, teacher, preacher at times
Telling us young people of color it not about them lame rhymes
Or killing our number cause we are dying
Express it
Confess it
Bless it bless the us that don’t know how to Confess it
Education is now there
But we still seem to be a mother showing favoritism to one sibling
Bless us
Bless Hamer
For your work is definitely true
Letting these us know that they in this story too
For that we thank you


The author's comments:

Forrest Hammer’s poem, which talks about my lists of interest, indicates we have similar mindsets on life.

Forrest Hammer is a poet that knows how to keep his idea of teaching lessons about society in a way that the young people can relate to. Keeping young, telling the story, teaching lessons, Hammer knows how to get his message across. Poet, teacher, and preacher at times, he helped people realize that life is not about busting them rhymes. Hammer and I relate to the message, the message about life; how society may not change, but it is up to you to change it. People of color, don’t have to be what people expect them to be because of different race or different cultural background.
I can certainly relate to Forrest Hammer defiantly, because of me being an African Native American. I have seen how society expects how young blacks, Indian, Hispanics are looked at. I remember, interviewing a primary source for National History Day, and she said that she and others did not fight for education, for young people to throw it away now that it is there. We are becoming what society wants us to come. Yet do we know that through Christ we can do all things? Even though we are equal, we still find a divide ourselves. Brown sugar and flour, mix together like a cake, we still have to bake.


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