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His Eyes

February 26, 2015
By Amara-rose GOLD, Pendleton, Indiana
Amara-rose GOLD, Pendleton, Indiana
16 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let go and live.

His eyes can capture unseen truths within each of you.
His, stare you see.
It’s a powerful thing.
Some have truths they want to hide.
Others have truths that are there unseen pride.
For His eyes, His stare , well he can see them all.
So best you beware

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on May. 10 2015 at 3:55 pm
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.”
G.K. Chesterton

"And you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you."
Denis Johnson

Just...I don't even know... >.< Great job. It's tremendously wonderful, almost too good for my mind... Ouch. :)

on Apr. 26 2015 at 5:55 pm
Amara-rose GOLD, Pendleton, Indiana
16 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let go and live.

Than you for your kind words i have some work pending approval now how you check it out and love it ^_^

on Apr. 19 2015 at 5:44 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

^.^ I like this lol It's in the same category as my poem "eyes" lol Iove this XD keep writing and most definitely tell us what you do next :)

on Apr. 5 2015 at 5:57 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
21 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

I think you write wonderfully! But of course like always everything could use a touch up;)

on Mar. 24 2015 at 1:51 pm
TheBlackCrow901 SILVER, Chatham, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let this be your honour: always love more than you are loved and never to be second in this."

I love the flow of this poem

Cmwasl SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2015 at 7:20 pm
Cmwasl SILVER, Vancouver, District Of Columbia
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Very nice idea to write about. "His, stare you see" sounds a bit confusing and choppy, so maybe you could change it to "Into them, you stare" or something along those lines. A bit of editing would make the poem even better C:

on Mar. 8 2015 at 12:38 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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I love the ideas in this poem with his captivating stare which can 'capture unseen truths'. Rhyming is a little rocky as it's only there once and the ending is stunted. I think if you'd rhymed the end also, it might have ended with more finality. Punctuation could be improved.

on Mar. 8 2015 at 10:59 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I like the idea and the lines here. My only suggestion is grammatical and spelling editing.

on Mar. 6 2015 at 10:35 am
Amara-rose GOLD, Pendleton, Indiana
16 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let go and live.

sure i will later today atm im working on a new poem

HammadWaseem said...
on Mar. 5 2015 at 2:43 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
0 articles 5 photos 283 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!

What a wonderful poem! @Amara-rose will you comment on my video work? TeenInk.com/video/dancing/114206/The-Unbeatable-Breakdancer